Elements
By Maayan - bronze member
Submitted on January 20, 2026
Elements
Water’s crazy, splashing my shoes,
Rivers everywhere, kinda like juice.
Fire’s wild, pops and goes “BANG!”,
Hot on my hands, but also a fang.
Earth is chill, just sitting there,
Dirt and rocks, roots everywhere.
Air is sneaky, I can’t even see,
But it messes my hair and tickles me.
They’re all around, doing their thing,
Making the world spin, zing, zing, zing!
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AAH I LOVE THIS COMBINED! I also love the imagery and onamotopoeia (i cant spell ) that you used in the last stanza. This sounds like it would be a cool song or rhyme. Well done!
Comment by lilrose on January 21, 2026Liked by 1
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