Poem-ish Story
By Anonymouse - bronze member
Submitted on August 14, 2025
Poem
I_ see the body.
D_ripping blood.
I_ can't believe someone would do this.
D_on't want to ever meet them.
I_ break down, holding my friends hand.
T_omorrow, I'll investigate the case.
(Now read the first letter of each sentence)
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what would be kind of cool in my opinion would be to put a space between the capital letter of each sentence and what comes next so that it's seperated, kind of like: "D | on't want to ever meet them" so that the | forms a line seperating the first letters from everything else. But that's just a random suggestion lol
Comment by rose on August 15, 2025Liked by 0 -
Yeah. It took me a second to realize there where spaces - maybe put underscores? Shock!
Comment by raob9 on September 05, 2025Liked by 0
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Hi! I’m Lyra. I had a thought about your poetry some poems carry such strong emotions, imagery, or atmosphere that they could work beautifully as visual artwork too, rather than staying only as written pieces. I’m a commission-based artist with around 3 years of experience, and I create illustrations based on ideas and writing. I’d love to turn one of your poems into artwork, whether that’s an illustrated scene, symbolic piece, or even a visual format you could share to promote your poetry and reach more readers. If that sounds interesting, I’d be happy to show you my portfolio. You can contact me via mail: contact.lilaclines@gmail.com insta: _lilac_lines_
Comment by lyraxo on September 12, 2026Liked by 0
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