Alone

poem

Alone, alone, alone
While fire-stars stream by
Alone, alone, alone
On a once-vibrant planet
Alone, alone, alone
That held once-grand life before
Alone, alone, alone
With the ever-changing seasons
It dies.

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Comments for this chapter

• I love the repetition and the pattern in the even-number lines. The ending is a bit abrupt though. Maybe add something which indicates (or just hints at, because the atmosphere rn is great) who 'it' refers to? The planet, or everything on it?

  Comment by AsphodelBlue on July 12, 2025

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