End of Time
By testreader - bronze member
Submitted on June 01, 2025
Poem
Two People
Standing
The Chasm
Widening
Their Arms
Reaching
On The Earth
Ending
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ending the poem literally with the word "ending' is such a unique choice and honestly it works really well
Comment by rose on June 03, 2025Liked by 0 -
Ooo i think this poem could work really well as a shape poem, with one word on each side of the page and slowly tearing apart
Comment by AsphodelBlue on July 12, 2025Liked by 1 -
I think the Poem is nice. its short witch and the lines are only one or two words witch makes it so smooth and nice to read.
Comment by Maayan on January 15, 2026Liked by 0
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